Friday, April 1, 2016

Nature Poem


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Nature Poem

Bright buds opening
Sparkling sun and whooshing wind
A new beginning




2 comments:

  1. Really well written
    but the words didn't quite fit-in
    It was a good choice
    it filled me up with rejoice

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  2. Aly,
    This poem did have great motivation
    And it added to my education
    But the words seemed a little out of place
    But it was great excluding that one case

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